03-28-2011, 06:20 AM
So you don't think I need the lines in brackets? I'll delete them then. I only added them as a way of explaining why I repeated "like blood", which looking back was completely pointless. You're right, one does already have the sense of them being delicious from said repetition. Thanks for the feedback and kind words
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe