03-31-2011, 04:48 PM
the way you say the c word with a seemingly straight face is more than awesome.
you have a great speaking voice jacko, one which lifts your poetry to the highest of levels.
the gap between continue and unmoved feels a little strained but it is really only a nit and most others will prob like it as is.
well done.
you have a great speaking voice jacko, one which lifts your poetry to the highest of levels.
the gap between continue and unmoved feels a little strained but it is really only a nit and most others will prob like it as is.
well done.