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Propelled
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07-09-2011, 06:42 AM
There's nothing too small to build a poem from. I love your metaphor here, though every time I read the second line I want to leave out the "in" -- it only changes the meaning slightly but it emphasises the sonics a little more. Of course, that's possibly just in my head
It could be worse
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RE: Propelled - by billy - 07-08-2011, 02:25 PM
RE: Propelled - by Aish - 07-08-2011, 02:31 PM
RE: Propelled - by Leanne - 07-09-2011, 06:42 AM
RE: Propelled - by Aish - 07-09-2011, 08:07 AM
RE: Propelled - by billy - 07-09-2011, 08:28 AM
RE: Propelled - by Leanne - 07-09-2011, 08:11 AM
RE: Propelled - by Aish - 07-09-2011, 01:41 PM
RE: Propelled - by billy - 07-18-2011, 10:37 AM
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