The Lecturer's Tale
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i never noticed it as a rhyme scheme so it didn't and doesn't feel forced to me.
i had special names for my kids. in those instances i think we should ask ourselves; "will the reader get it" jmo,
hope to see more of your poetry. Smile
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The Lecturer's Tale - by abu nuwas - 08-16-2011, 04:52 AM
RE: The Lecturer's Tale - by billy - 08-16-2011, 06:00 AM
RE: The Lecturer's Tale - by abu nuwas - 08-16-2011, 07:22 AM
RE: The Lecturer's Tale - by billy - 08-16-2011, 07:50 AM
RE: The Lecturer's Tale - by abu nuwas - 08-16-2011, 07:57 AM
RE: The Lecturer's Tale - by addy - 08-16-2011, 11:11 AM
RE: The Lecturer's Tale - by abu nuwas - 08-16-2011, 10:25 PM
RE: The Lecturer's Tale - by addy - 08-17-2011, 09:03 AM
RE: The Lecturer's Tale - by Leanne - 08-17-2011, 05:11 AM
RE: The Lecturer's Tale - by abu nuwas - 08-17-2011, 08:00 PM



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