08-16-2011, 07:50 AM
i never noticed it as a rhyme scheme so it didn't and doesn't feel forced to me.
i had special names for my kids. in those instances i think we should ask ourselves; "will the reader get it" jmo,
hope to see more of your poetry.
i had special names for my kids. in those instances i think we should ask ourselves; "will the reader get it" jmo,
hope to see more of your poetry.
