08-16-2011, 10:30 AM
(the good thing here is it's also the novice feedback forum as well. not that this is feedback a novice would give.)
i will edit on what people say because that's the purpose of a poem that's posted here. specially on points that make sense
i looked up cliché on the flash cars, here on the right. and i think you're right. i'm not too knowing about meter
but i'll try and do some reading on the matter. thanks for helping me with the poem.
i will edit on what people say because that's the purpose of a poem that's posted here. specially on points that make sense
i looked up cliché on the flash cars, here on the right. and i think you're right. i'm not too knowing about meter
but i'll try and do some reading on the matter. thanks for helping me with the poem.