The Dark Rode (1st revision)

[billy]

A wheel bespoke
to turn and churn
ground in its wake

The knight emboldened
emblazoned with blood
over the axles creak
in the rut he rode

The day sank
into a growing dim
the cost of eternity..
for chasing the moon.

sadly i read the other comments and know i'm contaminated.
the bespoke thing seems to be the main topic. i feel that it would work better if put before wheel, as it is jars the syntax.

a bespoke wheel

would be like a bespoke suit or pair of shoes. tyre we want.
i do like the last verse specially 'into a growing dim' a great image. i get the impression (because of knight) of a modern day horse being the car.
keep in mind the grammar i think it's axle is possessive as in axle's
thanks for the read.