Blindness, a haiku
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(09-02-2011, 09:53 AM)Heslopian Wrote:  Thanks for the kind words and feedback, BilboSmile
Stupidity? I'm not sure I know what you mean. How is the blindness in the poem a trait of stupidity?
I guess it is more of a senryu though as it's just as much about expressing an idea than an image.
because blind can be read as something other than blindness from the snow. blindness from the perils and not preparing properly or taking good precautions to stay alive. as a haiku it should also have a Kigo (or seasonal word) in this case snow wouldn't count because it's always snowing from Sweden up to the pole, though snow is can normally denote a season
there's a list of seasonal words in a book called Saijiki though i've never read it :blush)

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Blindness, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-02-2011, 09:25 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by billy - 09-02-2011, 09:33 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-02-2011, 09:53 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by billy - 09-02-2011, 12:18 PM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by addy - 09-02-2011, 10:43 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-02-2011, 10:52 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-02-2011, 12:36 PM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by Aish - 09-15-2011, 03:44 PM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-16-2011, 02:17 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by Aish - 09-16-2011, 02:23 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-16-2011, 02:35 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by Aish - 09-16-2011, 03:21 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-16-2011, 03:31 AM
RE: Blindness, a haiku - by Aish - 09-16-2011, 03:46 AM



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