09-04-2011, 09:42 AM
Better 
If you wanted to, you could probably go with
"field of dying summer grass"
If you wanted to, you could probably go with
"field of dying summer grass"
It could be worse
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Carnival, a haiku
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Carnival, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-03-2011, 01:40 PM
RE: Carnival, a haiku - by billy - 09-03-2011, 03:47 PM
RE: Carnival, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-03-2011, 04:37 PM
RE: Carnival, a haiku - by billy - 09-03-2011, 04:46 PM
RE: Carnival, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-04-2011, 05:47 AM
RE: Carnival, a haiku - by billy - 09-04-2011, 09:33 AM
RE: Carnival, a haiku - by Leanne - 09-04-2011, 09:37 AM
RE: Carnival, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-04-2011, 09:40 AM
RE: Carnival, a haiku - by Leanne - 09-04-2011, 09:42 AM
RE: Carnival, a haiku - by billy - 09-04-2011, 09:42 AM
RE: Carnival, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-04-2011, 09:49 AM
RE: Carnival, a haiku - by billy - 09-07-2011, 03:59 PM
RE: Carnival, a haiku - by LaGitana - 09-15-2011, 07:51 PM
RE: Carnival, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-16-2011, 02:21 AM
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