The Dark Rode (1st revision)

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The Dark Rode (1st revision)

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09-05-2011, 06:00 AM

this is the learning forum for poetry and feedback.

by the look of it i think your objective critique is really good and suitable to post in any of the forums of course we can all improve but i think you did a good job here

objective feedback is the most common (i think) it the one i'm more at ease with. well done.

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The Dark Rode (1st revision) - by ckeo - 08-16-2011, 07:00 PM

RE: The Dark Rode - by Todd - 08-17-2011, 04:50 AM

RE: The Dark Rode - by Leanne - 08-17-2011, 05:03 AM

RE: The Dark Rode - by ckeo - 08-17-2011, 05:50 AM

RE: The Dark Rode - by addy - 08-17-2011, 09:25 AM

RE: The Dark Rode - by billy - 08-17-2011, 10:10 AM

RE: The Dark Rode - by abu nuwas - 08-18-2011, 03:24 AM

RE: The Dark Rode (1st revision) - by billy - 08-18-2011, 05:37 AM

RE: The Dark Rode (1st revision) - by Todd - 08-18-2011, 05:50 AM

RE: The Dark Rode (1st revision) - by Leanne - 08-20-2011, 06:56 AM

RE: The Dark Rode (1st revision) - by abu nuwas - 08-20-2011, 07:22 PM

RE: The Dark Rode (1st revision) - by Wildcard - 09-05-2011, 01:00 AM

RE: The Dark Rode (1st revision) - by billy - 09-05-2011, 06:00 AM

RE: The Dark Rode (1st revision) - by Wildcard - 09-05-2011, 07:57 AM

RE: The Dark Rode (1st revision) - by billy - 09-05-2011, 08:30 AM

RE: The Dark Rode (1st revision) - by Wildcard - 09-05-2011, 10:09 PM

RE: The Dark Rode (1st revision) - by grannyjill - 09-08-2011, 07:07 PM

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