09-07-2011, 07:53 PM
Thanks guys. Leanne, I like what you did, but I'm afraid I don't understand how you broke the parts up. It honestly seems arbitrary in places. My research is a little slow because I constantly get side-tracked, but I am trying to get this . . .
Addy, glad you liked 'hiding itself, within itself.' I wasn't sure anyone would even get what I was saying. As far as the over use of adjectives, I can see what you mean. Maybe I was just trying too hard to make sure I got the point across. I'll look at it again and see if I can condense.
Addy, glad you liked 'hiding itself, within itself.' I wasn't sure anyone would even get what I was saying. As far as the over use of adjectives, I can see what you mean. Maybe I was just trying too hard to make sure I got the point across. I'll look at it again and see if I can condense.