09-14-2011, 11:16 AM
Ok, I rewrote this but I went to the extreme. I just thought I'd better stay with what I've been studying. I'm liking it, but I am a little biased :p
it hid itself, within itself so dense
congealed. embedded, marbled sky contains
misshapen pillows roaming constantly.
The wetness of the gusts is shiver-fuel
a breach of heaven's mood provides a ray,
the misty synthesis of sun and air:
an iridescent specter arching low.
the beings gazing up so gratefully
it hid itself, within itself so dense
congealed. embedded, marbled sky contains
misshapen pillows roaming constantly.
The wetness of the gusts is shiver-fuel
a breach of heaven's mood provides a ray,
the misty synthesis of sun and air:
an iridescent specter arching low.
the beings gazing up so gratefully