Opportunist

[billy]

Many thanks Billy- I don't seem to be able to make the font changes stick for some reason- I had tried to use courier, as if written in a typewriter.
I will not lie to you- the extreme minimalism was an attempt to push it as far as I could for an exercise. I get the same feeling as when I lower the mower blades too much and almost scalp the lawn, part satisfaction, part wondering if the bald patches will grow back.

just do a quote on the poem and you should see how it's done. i seriously love the finer points of do as little as possible in order to generate the greatest effect. you were probably an 'a' and 'the' away from achieving it hehe. it def good enough for mild and even serious crit. hope you keep posting