October Poem

[billy]

Thanks Billy- I was not sure where to post as I was once reprimanded on another site for posting on more advanced forums than the baby slopes.
I am happy to get robust commentary.


Thanks Leanne.

post where you will, depending on what feedback you want. i personally think you're deserving of solid feedback. the novice section is aimed at those who are bright and shiny-new to poetry, in order that they don't get overwhelmed; and for those who are new to giving feedback other than back pats.

the thing we won't do, is treat you like a bad person, or reprimand you, hehe. on the very very odd occasion we will move a poem to novice, but as i say, it would have to be really really in need of milder interaction.