10-12-2011, 10:35 PM
Thanks, both you and Aish, for your notes.
It seems, for me anyway, that the wee poems take more editing and care than the larger ones. I keep trying to write really good shorts, but they seem really difficult. The punctuation here gave/gives me fits. The new incarnation is more minimalist.
It seems, for me anyway, that the wee poems take more editing and care than the larger ones. I keep trying to write really good shorts, but they seem really difficult. The punctuation here gave/gives me fits. The new incarnation is more minimalist.

