The Big November

The Big November

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10-13-2011, 04:46 AM

The line breaks work for the most part, but I'd tend to suggest

the woman in the
sun dress, backlit

to give a little more of a tumble to the words.

It could be worse

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The Big November - by only rob - 10-12-2011, 01:46 AM

RE: The Big November - by Aish - 10-12-2011, 04:16 AM

RE: The Big November - by Leanne - 10-12-2011, 04:22 AM

RE: The Big November - by only rob - 10-12-2011, 10:35 PM

RE: The Big November - by Aish - 10-12-2011, 06:00 AM

RE: The Big November - by Leanne - 10-13-2011, 04:46 AM

RE: The Big November - by addy - 10-13-2011, 03:55 PM

RE: The Big November - by only rob - 10-13-2011, 10:47 PM

RE: The Big November - by Wildcard - 10-14-2011, 03:17 AM

RE: The Big November - by Todd - 10-14-2011, 07:21 AM

RE: The Big November - by only rob - 10-15-2011, 11:28 PM

RE: The Big November - by billy - 10-16-2011, 02:23 PM

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RE: The Big November - by milo - 09-17-2013, 02:48 AM

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