The Big November

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Hi Rob,
   This is such a great poem. It stopped me in my tracks and then I read Stef say the same thing. I wish that I could write like this

 I won't attempt to critique what I think is a wonderful short poem, but I will say that when workshopping, I like to see the original version along with the current version. It helps as a late comer scans the critiques and plays 'catch up'. It's easy just use the quote tag like this:

Code:

[quote]
Original Version:

. . .
[/quote]

which will produce:

Original Version:

. . .

Just a suggestion. Thanks for sharing.