Persona Non Grata

Persona Non Grata

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10-16-2011, 12:17 PM

i like it as 2 stanza
and the 1'st line for me has a lot of depth.
have you thought about extending the piece?
i think a few more stanza with some imagery would wok well.

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Persona Non Grata - by Wildcard - 09-26-2011, 02:27 AM

RE: Persona Non Grata - by grannyjill - 09-26-2011, 02:46 AM

RE: Persona Non Grata - by Ca ne fait rien - 09-26-2011, 03:39 AM

RE: Persona Non Grata - by Wildcard - 09-26-2011, 05:20 AM

RE: Persona Non Grata - by Ca ne fait rien - 09-26-2011, 07:44 AM

RE: Persona Non Grata - by Wildcard - 09-26-2011, 07:49 AM

RE: Persona Non Grata - by billy - 09-28-2011, 11:19 AM

RE: Persona Non Grata - by Wildcard - 09-28-2011, 11:35 AM

RE: Persona Non Grata - by billy - 09-28-2011, 11:42 AM

RE: Persona Non Grata - by Wildcard - 09-28-2011, 12:17 PM

RE: Persona Non Grata - by Wildcard - 10-15-2011, 02:13 AM

RE: Persona Non Grata - by billy - 10-16-2011, 12:17 PM

RE: Persona Non Grata - by Wildcard - 10-16-2011, 12:52 PM

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