10-16-2011, 12:52 PM
Thank Stef for the two stanzas. Although he didn't actually suggest it, his comments lead me to the decision to split it up. Thanks for noticing 
and for the suggestion with 'drives.' Without it, 'hard' gets to do a little more work and (to me) proves a more ambiguous choice to bear the load. I haven't thought about adding to it, I am so afraid to go on too long until I get better at this.
Thanks for your help Billy.
and for the suggestion with 'drives.' Without it, 'hard' gets to do a little more work and (to me) proves a more ambiguous choice to bear the load. I haven't thought about adding to it, I am so afraid to go on too long until I get better at this.Thanks for your help Billy.