Snowy
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I have come to commenting on this rather late, although it has a familiar ring. It resembles a snippet of some long narrative, where all would be revealed, perhaps the story of a blind seer. The dreamy quality is contrasted with the crisp two liners, and esp. the simple statement at the end. Of course to a foreigner, anything emanating from Australia hinting of dreaminess, immediately flags up 'Dreamtime'.

Once again, the spoken version adds all sorts of flavours. So nice to read, and hear.
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Snowy - by Leanne - 08-29-2011, 11:24 AM
RE: Snowy - by Todd - 08-29-2011, 12:02 PM
RE: Snowy - by Leanne - 08-29-2011, 12:10 PM
RE: Snowy - by billy - 08-29-2011, 02:25 PM
RE: Snowy - by Leanne - 08-29-2011, 02:51 PM
RE: Snowy - by Aish - 08-30-2011, 02:33 AM
RE: Snowy - by Leanne - 08-30-2011, 04:38 AM
RE: Snowy - by Wildcard - 09-07-2011, 02:14 AM
RE: Snowy - by Leanne - 09-07-2011, 05:38 AM
RE: Snowy - by Wildcard - 09-07-2011, 05:53 AM
RE: Snowy - by Todd - 09-07-2011, 05:56 AM
RE: Snowy - by Leanne - 09-07-2011, 08:33 AM
RE: Snowy - by Todd - 09-07-2011, 09:15 AM
RE: Snowy - by abu nuwas - 10-16-2011, 09:07 PM
RE: Snowy - by Leanne - 10-17-2011, 05:58 AM
RE: Snowy - by Leanne - 10-17-2011, 01:23 PM
RE: Snowy - by heslopian - 11-06-2011, 11:21 AM
RE: Snowy - by Leanne - 11-09-2011, 06:36 AM
RE: Snowy - by grannyjill - 11-12-2011, 10:46 PM
RE: Snowy - by Leanne - 11-13-2011, 06:11 AM



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