11-25-2011, 04:45 PM
What are you on, Mark?....the first verse sounds like a hippy-trip (sorry if that sounds dated....I am dated)
and the second verse hurt my brain 'cos of concentrating on meaning....but, then I decided 'What the hell' - I like the sounds you make and I like the imagery of the first verse, so I'm going with that.
I liked the title too, because it gave me pause for thought, because of double- meaning either 'empowered' or 'named'Edit -
Hi, I've come back for another look...hm, let me see....
tone tuned to
laudatory laughter
for an eponymous tome
of pure fiction
Tuned to
admiring laughter
for a hero-titled book
of lies
...well, I think I'm getting it now (but a self-proclaimed liar may be pulling the wool over my eyes)
and the second verse hurt my brain 'cos of concentrating on meaning....but, then I decided 'What the hell' - I like the sounds you make and I like the imagery of the first verse, so I'm going with that.
I liked the title too, because it gave me pause for thought, because of double- meaning either 'empowered' or 'named'Edit -
Hi, I've come back for another look...hm, let me see....
tone tuned to
laudatory laughter
for an eponymous tome
of pure fiction
Tuned to
admiring laughter
for a hero-titled book
of lies
...well, I think I'm getting it now (but a self-proclaimed liar may be pulling the wool over my eyes)