11-25-2011, 08:16 PM
Hi, Mark
I can't write classic stuff, so I have no right to be critiquing this anyway...I'm a simple soul and having my brain stretched is painful for me. But, I'm the best you've got at the moment (it seems). I look forward to reading what others have to say.
....I shall have to look up 'eponymous' - I thought it meant where the book has the same name as the 'hero' of the story...like Oliver Twist.....damn me my dictionary has let me down, it's only got eponym!
Please post some more...I promise to behave.
.....I never said anything about 'washed out'
I can't write classic stuff, so I have no right to be critiquing this anyway...I'm a simple soul and having my brain stretched is painful for me. But, I'm the best you've got at the moment (it seems). I look forward to reading what others have to say.
....I shall have to look up 'eponymous' - I thought it meant where the book has the same name as the 'hero' of the story...like Oliver Twist.....damn me my dictionary has let me down, it's only got eponym!
Please post some more...I promise to behave.
.....I never said anything about 'washed out'