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oooh, very clever Mark. I especially love the first verse, since I've read nothing like it before. There's a real, almost innocent feeling of anxiousness? In any case I really like this one
 edit: btw, should it be "lauding laughter", rather than laudatory? Just curious.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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self-entitled - by Wildcard - 11-25-2011, 12:11 AM
RE: self-entitled - by grannyjill - 11-25-2011, 04:45 PM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 11-25-2011, 07:46 PM
RE: self-entitled - by grannyjill - 11-25-2011, 08:16 PM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 11-26-2011, 01:00 AM
RE: self-entitled - by addy - 11-26-2011, 02:42 PM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 11-26-2011, 09:07 PM
RE: self-entitled - by Leanne - 11-27-2011, 06:02 AM
RE: self-entitled - by grannyjill - 11-27-2011, 06:39 PM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 11-28-2011, 11:37 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Leanne - 11-28-2011, 01:22 PM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 11-28-2011, 08:31 PM
RE: self-entitled - by Leanne - 11-29-2011, 04:18 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 11-29-2011, 06:15 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Todd - 11-29-2011, 07:25 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 11-29-2011, 08:00 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 12-02-2011, 04:14 AM
RE: self-entitled - by grannyjill - 12-02-2011, 07:25 PM
RE: self-entitled - by billy - 12-08-2011, 12:06 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 12-08-2011, 12:08 AM
RE: self-entitled - by billy - 12-08-2011, 12:11 AM
RE: self-entitled - by heslopian - 12-08-2011, 04:23 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 12-08-2011, 06:21 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Todd - 12-08-2011, 07:43 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 12-08-2011, 01:43 PM
RE: self-entitled - by billy - 12-09-2011, 05:30 PM
RE: self-entitled - by grannyjill - 12-12-2011, 12:08 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 12-12-2011, 02:55 AM
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