How Memories Fade

[grannyjill]

Yep, I liked the butterflies, too....the only bit of the poem I did like, actually! I get really mad at myself because so often, (as here) a finished poem is nothing like what my mind is saying!

The 'comma' thingy - those words aren't important enough to warrant separate billing...so, I will simply omit the commas.

Thanks for your valuable input.