11-27-2011, 06:39 PM
Now, I've re-read your first verse with some-one else's brain...and whether Leanne is right or not, it certainly brings the verse to life for me....it's all about conformity and role-playing. Yes?
(I really must try harder)
Skin Deep
I'm a sexagenarian
who tango's in the moonlight
wearing a purple hat.
By day I bake sweet apple pies
whaddya think of that!
...in case anyone jumps on me...
Lynne Truss says it is correct to use the apostrophe with foreign words when pluralising them, in order to prevent mispronunciation
(I really must try harder)
Skin Deep
I'm a sexagenarian
who tango's in the moonlight
wearing a purple hat.
By day I bake sweet apple pies
whaddya think of that!
...in case anyone jumps on me...
Lynne Truss says it is correct to use the apostrophe with foreign words when pluralising them, in order to prevent mispronunciation

