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#11
11-28-2011, 01:22 PM
Well, it's less tricky to figure out who it's about when you start off with "I am..." Smile

The masses love the gloss and sparkle -- the novelty of having that shiny forcefield around your "true self" wears off fairly quickly, unless you're one of those folk who desperately need ego stroking every five seconds. Then you're just left with "if only they knew..."
It could be worse
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self-entitled - by Wildcard - 11-25-2011, 12:11 AM
RE: self-entitled - by grannyjill - 11-25-2011, 04:45 PM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 11-25-2011, 07:46 PM
RE: self-entitled - by grannyjill - 11-25-2011, 08:16 PM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 11-26-2011, 01:00 AM
RE: self-entitled - by addy - 11-26-2011, 02:42 PM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 11-26-2011, 09:07 PM
RE: self-entitled - by Leanne - 11-27-2011, 06:02 AM
RE: self-entitled - by grannyjill - 11-27-2011, 06:39 PM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 11-28-2011, 11:37 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Leanne - 11-28-2011, 01:22 PM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 11-28-2011, 08:31 PM
RE: self-entitled - by Leanne - 11-29-2011, 04:18 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 11-29-2011, 06:15 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Todd - 11-29-2011, 07:25 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 11-29-2011, 08:00 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 12-02-2011, 04:14 AM
RE: self-entitled - by grannyjill - 12-02-2011, 07:25 PM
RE: self-entitled - by billy - 12-08-2011, 12:06 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 12-08-2011, 12:08 AM
RE: self-entitled - by billy - 12-08-2011, 12:11 AM
RE: self-entitled - by heslopian - 12-08-2011, 04:23 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 12-08-2011, 06:21 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Todd - 12-08-2011, 07:43 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 12-08-2011, 01:43 PM
RE: self-entitled - by billy - 12-09-2011, 05:30 PM
RE: self-entitled - by grannyjill - 12-12-2011, 12:08 AM
RE: self-entitled - by Wildcard - 12-12-2011, 02:55 AM



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