11-28-2011, 05:04 PM
Revision
A manuscript, yellowed and grey,
creased like a discarded
Sunday afternoon newspaper,
mottled and moled.
Getting old- my skin.
A manuscript, yellowed and grey
scattered with dung-coloured patches
and creased like a discarded
Sunday afternoon newspaper.
Mottled and moled
Getting old – my skin.
I am trying to free myself from my 'normal' style of poetry writing, so I've had some fun writing this...and with no rewrites I am presenting it to you - am I on the right track?
A manuscript, yellowed and grey,
creased like a discarded
Sunday afternoon newspaper,
mottled and moled.
Getting old- my skin.
A manuscript, yellowed and grey
scattered with dung-coloured patches
and creased like a discarded
Sunday afternoon newspaper.
Mottled and moled
Getting old – my skin.
I am trying to free myself from my 'normal' style of poetry writing, so I've had some fun writing this...and with no rewrites I am presenting it to you - am I on the right track?