11-28-2011, 08:43 PM
I'm not sure about writing sentences (as I have done) which seem chopped off. I need help with this kind of thing. I think my old English teacher would say ....That's not a sentence! (But, I don't know quite why).
........with the break, it seems even worse.
I'm going to fight for 'dung-coloured'...as I was creating this my brain searched for a colour more interesting than 'brown'...and came up with 'dung'. I realised that what it meant to tell me was 'dun'. But this isn't edited so I left it.
Perhaps, since I hate the cow-pats on my face (edit - and body) , my subconscious might be trying to say this!.....of course, it may be just that I got it wrong.
Thank you for helping.
........with the break, it seems even worse.
I'm going to fight for 'dung-coloured'...as I was creating this my brain searched for a colour more interesting than 'brown'...and came up with 'dung'. I realised that what it meant to tell me was 'dun'. But this isn't edited so I left it.
Perhaps, since I hate the cow-pats on my face (edit - and body) , my subconscious might be trying to say this!.....of course, it may be just that I got it wrong.
Thank you for helping.