Playing with a new toy

[Wildcard]

Hi Jill,
I've been looking this one over for a minute but I wanted to see how the others were looking at it before I gave my worthless opinion

A manuscript, yellowed and grey,
creased like a discarded -- does the simile weaken this line? What about moving 'creased' up a line in front of 'manuscript' and reforming the simile to be 'discarded like' instead?
Sunday afternoon newspaper,
mottled and moled. --how is the paper moled? Or am I missing something?
Getting old- my skin

The last line seems a little too telly to me, but I have no suggestions for an alternative unfortunately.

Well that's my two cents. Thanks for sharing Jill.