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Playing with a new toy

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11-30-2011, 06:05 AM

(11-30-2011, 04:21 AM)Leanne Wrote: I don't consider the last lines 'telly' at all, I view them as a summary and think they do their job quite well.

My thoughts exactly.

"The fool doth think he is wise, but the wise man knows himself to be a fool."

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Playing with a new toy - by grannyjill - 11-28-2011, 05:04 PM

RE: Playing with a new toy - by Touchstone - 11-28-2011, 05:56 PM

RE: Playing with a new toy - by grannyjill - 11-28-2011, 08:43 PM

RE: Playing with a new toy - by Touchstone - 11-28-2011, 09:09 PM

RE: Playing with a new toy - by grannyjill - 11-28-2011, 09:33 PM

RE: Playing with a new toy - by Touchstone - 11-28-2011, 10:08 PM

RE: Playing with a new toy - by Leanne - 11-29-2011, 04:52 AM

RE: Playing with a new toy - by Touchstone - 11-29-2011, 05:22 AM

RE: Playing with a new toy - by Wildcard - 11-29-2011, 06:55 AM

RE: Playing with a new toy - by grannyjill - 11-29-2011, 07:21 AM

RE: Playing with a new toy - by Leanne - 11-29-2011, 09:47 AM

RE: Playing with a new toy - by Wildcard - 11-29-2011, 09:56 AM

RE: Playing with a new toy - by grannyjill - 11-29-2011, 04:34 PM

RE: Playing with a new toy - by Leanne - 11-30-2011, 04:21 AM

RE: Playing with a new toy - by grannyjill - 11-30-2011, 05:20 AM

RE: Playing with a new toy - by Touchstone - 11-30-2011, 06:05 AM

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