How Memories Fade

[grannyjill]

I am so happy to read such close analysis....I've not had the advantage of this before.

I am learning how to see with the eyes of others and to concentrate far more, when re-writing, on meaning instead of rhyme (my weakness...I find it very hard to let a rhyme-opportunity pass by unused!)

I don't think this is a particularly worthy piece, but it may become so with a bit more work.

Thanks, folks