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For Love (double etheree)

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12-02-2011, 04:45 AM

(12-01-2011, 04:45 PM)grannyjill Wrote: ......is that why some poets don't use punctuation?

Yes it is

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In fact, if you tried taking all the end-line punctuation out of this, you'd probably find it looks quite a bit cleaner and also leaves the stops up to the reader (which sometimes forces a closer, more thoughtful reading).

I really love that shed image, it's absolutely gorgeous.

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For Love (double etheree) - by grannyjill - 11-27-2011, 05:07 PM

RE: For Love (double etheree) - by Philatone - 11-30-2011, 11:57 AM

RE: For Love (double etheree) - by grannyjill - 12-01-2011, 04:45 PM

RE: For Love (double etheree) - by Leanne - 12-02-2011, 04:45 AM

RE: For Love (double etheree) - by Wildcard - 12-02-2011, 04:58 AM

RE: For Love (double etheree) - by grannyjill - 12-02-2011, 08:27 PM

RE: For Love (double etheree) - by billy - 12-07-2011, 08:55 PM

RE: For Love (double etheree) - by grannyjill - 12-08-2011, 07:42 AM

RE: For Love (double etheree) - by billy - 12-08-2011, 10:47 PM

RE: For Love (double etheree) - by grannyjill - 12-10-2011, 05:13 AM

RE: For Love (double etheree) - by rayheinrich - 12-10-2011, 08:01 AM

RE: For Love (double etheree) - by billy - 12-11-2011, 08:44 PM

RE: For Love (double etheree) - by Leanne - 12-11-2011, 11:28 AM

RE: For Love (double etheree) - by grannyjill - 12-11-2011, 05:19 PM

RE: For Love (double etheree) - by billy - 12-11-2011, 08:39 PM

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