self-entitled

[billy]

I am a liar
a dry lizard on chlorophyll
such a prize in the crowd
of vegetables swaying
in sync with the monotonous breeze

I blow a grin at them
tone tuned to
their laudatory laughter
emitting an eponymous tome
of pure fiction

Original

I am a liar
a dry lizard on chlorophyll
lost in a crowd of vegetables
swaying in sync

tone tuned to
laudatory laughter
for an eponymous tome
of pure fiction

everyone has said everything.
so i can sit on my ass and just say i liked it.
i noted you ask if we didn't know you would we know what it was about?
i think the last line of the 1st verse tells us the 'i am' is a performer. the crowd of veg that it's probably a concert of sorts. the 1st line shows you to know what you are. and to some extent accept it. when i say you, i mean the 1st person
i thought it a good small read (working off the edited version)

ps, would swaying veg or vegetables work better. ?