12-08-2011, 04:23 AM
(11-25-2011, 12:11 AM)Mark Wrote: I am a liarAll JMHO of course. Thanks for the read, Mark.
a dry lizard on chlorophyll
such a prize in the crowd
of vegetables swaying
in sync with the monotonous breeze Is "monotonous" needed? Seems too telling. Otherwise an excellent image.
I blow a grin at them The vegetables?
tone tuned to
their laudatory laughter
emitting an eponymous tome I'm not sure "emitting" is the right word. What about "producing"?
of pure fiction
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I am a liar
a dry lizard on chlorophyll
lost in a crowd of vegetables
swaying in sync
tone tuned to
laudatory laughter
for an eponymous tome
of pure fiction
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

