self-entitled

[heslopian]

I am a liar
a dry lizard on chlorophyll
such a prize in the crowd
of vegetables swaying
in sync with the monotonous breeze Is "monotonous" needed? Seems too telling. Otherwise an excellent image.

I blow a grin at them The vegetables?
tone tuned to
their laudatory laughter
emitting an eponymous tome I'm not sure "emitting" is the right word. What about "producing"?
of pure fiction

Original

I am a liar
a dry lizard on chlorophyll
lost in a crowd of vegetables
swaying in sync

tone tuned to
laudatory laughter
for an eponymous tome
of pure fiction

All JMHO of course. Thanks for the read, Mark.