12-11-2011, 10:10 PM
just stay where you feel safe if that's what you want 
it can be a bit hairy at times in serious crit hehe.
i never saw the 'she is grateful' as the last line, but yeah.
it does work well and still leaves the poem with that coldness we feel when sadness is about.
it can be a bit hairy at times in serious crit hehe.
i never saw the 'she is grateful' as the last line, but yeah.
it does work well and still leaves the poem with that coldness we feel when sadness is about.