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01-08-2012, 06:08 AM

thank you very much for the feedback, you're helping me very much!
I agree with the tenses...

and I will look at it and I think I will rewrite some parts..

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From young to old - by babeismijnkat - 01-01-2012, 03:57 AM

RE: From young to old - by Erthona - 01-01-2012, 08:20 AM

RE: From young to old - by babeismijnkat - 01-08-2012, 06:08 AM

RE: From young to old - by tectak - 02-19-2012, 01:42 AM

RE: From young to old - by Leanne - 02-19-2012, 06:35 AM

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