Half a goodbye
#15
great to see you can do a rewrite, few can let go of their scribbles when they are too close ( high five)
not sure if my reading is anywhere near , but now I see a sad father seeing his child away not a sad lover as I did . I got that from "small hand" right at the start and my tail pricked up and wagged.

ditto Dale --- I have to run away now, going to court Big Grin this should be fun
Perfection changes with the light and light goes on for infinity ~~~Bronte

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Half a goodbye - by Philatone - 03-19-2012, 05:37 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Wildcard - 03-19-2012, 06:18 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Philatone - 03-19-2012, 06:48 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Bronte - 03-19-2012, 08:35 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Erthona - 03-19-2012, 09:12 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Philatone - 03-19-2012, 09:44 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Bronte - 03-19-2012, 10:47 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Philatone - 03-19-2012, 11:29 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Bronte - 03-19-2012, 11:37 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by billy - 03-19-2012, 11:50 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Philatone - 03-20-2012, 05:43 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Erthona - 03-20-2012, 12:17 PM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Philatone - 03-20-2012, 01:02 PM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Erthona - 03-20-2012, 01:40 PM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Bronte - 03-20-2012, 02:09 PM
RE: Half a goodbye - by billy - 03-20-2012, 06:13 PM
RE: Half a goodbye - by abu nuwas - 03-20-2012, 08:25 PM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Philatone - 03-21-2012, 09:59 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by billy - 03-21-2012, 11:55 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Philatone - 03-21-2012, 01:02 PM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Erthona - 03-21-2012, 02:30 PM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Roy Hobbs - 03-22-2012, 03:48 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Philatone - 03-22-2012, 12:55 PM



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