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Half a goodbye
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03-20-2012, 08:25 PM
Candidly, I began reading this rather irascibly, and wondering what was the point of the line-breaks, and why not just write out a simple paragragh. I thought figures of speech in earlier versions were overblown: airports don' walk about. However, having read it several times in all its incarnations (cliche), I find it has a quiet, sad, tone which I rather like. Arrivals and Departures must all the time be a place of much joy, and much hand-wringing!
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Half a goodbye - by Philatone - 03-19-2012, 05:37 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Wildcard - 03-19-2012, 06:18 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Philatone - 03-19-2012, 06:48 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Bronte - 03-19-2012, 08:35 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Erthona - 03-19-2012, 09:12 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Philatone - 03-19-2012, 09:44 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Bronte - 03-19-2012, 10:47 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Philatone - 03-19-2012, 11:29 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Bronte - 03-19-2012, 11:37 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by billy - 03-19-2012, 11:50 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Philatone - 03-20-2012, 05:43 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Erthona - 03-20-2012, 12:17 PM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Philatone - 03-20-2012, 01:02 PM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Erthona - 03-20-2012, 01:40 PM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Bronte - 03-20-2012, 02:09 PM
RE: Half a goodbye - by billy - 03-20-2012, 06:13 PM
RE: Half a goodbye - by abu nuwas - 03-20-2012, 08:25 PM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Philatone - 03-21-2012, 09:59 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by billy - 03-21-2012, 11:55 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Philatone - 03-21-2012, 01:02 PM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Erthona - 03-21-2012, 02:30 PM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Roy Hobbs - 03-22-2012, 03:48 AM
RE: Half a goodbye - by Philatone - 03-22-2012, 12:55 PM
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