Oestra
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First, I love oestras of all sorts, Pacifics, Natives, any, I can eat them by the tray, even if I do still stab myself in the process. It is a little sad to swallow down a living thing, but , on the other hand, I appreciate that the oestra was born to be a sacrifice, for me to live.

I was a bit put out by the structure, as I thought it was to be an end-rhyme thing. 3rd line of S2 alone makes up for that, and with the last lines was the best for me. I would say 'grateful for', but no doubt that is just differing manners of speech.

Now, must be Good Friday there, or Hot Cross Bun Day. I wonder if I shall be able to get some high quality ones, where you can get the cross off intact..... Wink
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Messages In This Thread
Oestra - by Leanne - 04-05-2012, 06:27 PM
RE: Oestra - by abu nuwas - 04-06-2012, 04:57 AM
RE: Oestra - by Bronte - 04-11-2012, 10:59 PM
RE: Oestra - by Todd - 04-06-2012, 05:28 AM
RE: Oestra - by Leanne - 04-06-2012, 06:06 AM
RE: Oestra - by rayheinrich - 04-06-2012, 07:09 AM
RE: Oestra - by Leanne - 04-06-2012, 07:12 AM
RE: Oestra - by billy - 04-08-2012, 11:27 AM
RE: Oestra - by Leanne - 04-09-2012, 06:18 AM
RE: Oestra - by popeye - 04-09-2012, 08:11 AM
RE: Oestra - by Leanne - 04-10-2012, 01:03 PM
RE: Oestra - by Aish - 06-16-2012, 10:32 AM
RE: Oestra - by addy - 06-17-2012, 12:32 PM
RE: Oestra - by Leanne - 06-24-2012, 05:47 AM
RE: Oestra - by abu nuwas - 06-28-2012, 02:37 AM
RE: Oestra - by Leanne - 06-28-2012, 05:49 AM



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