yellowjackets

yellowjackets

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04-17-2012, 01:48 PM

billy
probably was the most helpful crit I could have gotten right now. I'm having trouble balancing too little with just enough when editing on my own. I've added a few notes to give the work some meat

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yellowjackets - by Philatone - 04-15-2012, 12:13 AM

RE: the imposition - by Chaotic Body - 04-15-2012, 08:43 AM

RE: the imposition - by Philatone - 04-17-2012, 10:07 AM

RE: the imposition - by billy - 04-17-2012, 11:19 AM

RE: the imposition - by Philatone - 04-17-2012, 01:48 PM

RE: the imposition - by billy - 04-17-2012, 05:13 PM

RE: the imposition - by Philatone - 04-17-2012, 09:27 PM

RE: the imposition - by tectak - 04-30-2012, 09:41 PM

RE: the imposition - by Philatone - 05-01-2012, 10:08 AM

RE: yellowjackets - by Philatone - 05-08-2012, 03:35 AM

RE: yellowjackets - by Erthona - 05-08-2012, 07:44 AM

RE: yellowjackets - by Indie - 05-08-2012, 10:08 AM

RE: yellowjackets - by billy - 05-08-2012, 10:57 AM

RE: yellowjackets - by Philatone - 05-08-2012, 11:15 AM

RE: yellowjackets - by addy - 05-08-2012, 11:19 AM

RE: yellowjackets - by Erthona - 05-08-2012, 02:32 PM

RE: yellowjackets - by Philatone - 05-08-2012, 09:45 PM

RE: yellowjackets - by billy - 05-09-2012, 11:20 AM

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