04-19-2012, 12:36 PM 
	
	
	
		sorry for getting here late 
if i read it as a piece of boredom it works really well; a snapshot of boredom, sleep late rise later with nothing to do.
i think it's worth expanding it though. i don't have any nits as such, i'd just like to see more of it.
thanks for the read.
	
	
	

if i read it as a piece of boredom it works really well; a snapshot of boredom, sleep late rise later with nothing to do.
i think it's worth expanding it though. i don't have any nits as such, i'd just like to see more of it.
thanks for the read.

 

