05-02-2012, 09:39 AM
great try with the haiku mark.
sadly i'm struggling to understand it. usually there used as a slice of time that captures an image.
i'm presuming the first line refers to sky.
just a bit of an idea for you to use if it helps;
Opalescent blue sky
hovers over scattered ants-
Pitiless, the sky. (not sure how to rephrase this line)
sadly i'm struggling to understand it. usually there used as a slice of time that captures an image.
i'm presuming the first line refers to sky.
just a bit of an idea for you to use if it helps;
Opalescent blue sky
hovers over scattered ants-
Pitiless, the sky. (not sure how to rephrase this line)