06-16-2012, 10:32 AM
The "new" version is loverly. I am especially smiley-facing over
the first two strophes.
Oh, who am I kidding?I wish I had thought of this!
the first two strophes.
Oh, who am I kidding?I wish I had thought of this!
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

