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A Voice from the Flames

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06-27-2012, 12:03 AM

Thank you for your feedback tectak Smile

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Do you think the use of "faggotry" in this poem is unneeded?

"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

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A Voice from the Flames - by heslopian - 06-22-2012, 10:26 PM

RE: A Voice from Outside - by addy - 06-24-2012, 09:39 AM

RE: A Voice from Outside - by billy - 06-24-2012, 10:43 AM

RE: A Voice from Outside - by heslopian - 06-24-2012, 10:53 AM

RE: A Voice from Outside - by billy - 06-24-2012, 12:27 PM

RE: A Voice from Outside - by heslopian - 06-24-2012, 03:27 PM

RE: A Voice from Outside - by billy - 06-24-2012, 04:52 PM

RE: A Voice from Outside - by heslopian - 06-25-2012, 06:53 PM

RE: A Voice from Outside - by billy - 06-25-2012, 06:56 PM

RE: A Voice from Outside - by tectak - 06-26-2012, 09:18 PM

RE: A Voice from Outside - by heslopian - 06-27-2012, 12:03 AM

RE: A Voice from Outside - by tectak - 06-27-2012, 04:00 AM

RE: A Voice from Outside - by heslopian - 06-27-2012, 03:59 PM

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