06-27-2012, 03:59 PM 
	
	
	
		Thank you for your thoughtful explanation tectak I understand completely. I worried that by using such terms my poems like this would feel contrived, as though I were trying to crudely force my way into a mindset and impress the reader.
 I understand completely. I worried that by using such terms my poems like this would feel contrived, as though I were trying to crudely force my way into a mindset and impress the reader.
	
	
	
 I understand completely. I worried that by using such terms my poems like this would feel contrived, as though I were trying to crudely force my way into a mindset and impress the reader.
 I understand completely. I worried that by using such terms my poems like this would feel contrived, as though I were trying to crudely force my way into a mindset and impress the reader.
	
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
	

 

 
