The Party Boys

[Timmycom]

It's obvious you put a lot of work into this. This was amusing, unique, and insightful all in one. I love how it's a journey from childhood friendships that's innocent and imaginative to young men getting drunk together and doing stupid things.

"oh their childish impressions, almost as frightful"----I would change that to terrifying
and maybe
"As frightfully wonderful..." change frightfully to terribly or something like that

Love the ending, it's hilarious and gives the poem a little extra, it works well with what you were going for with this.
Your hard work to put this together is paid off for sure.
Amazing job, the images were fun and original. Thank you for the read.

Haha! TERRIBLE! BUT OF COURCE! IT WAS SO SIMPLE! Haha XD That was bugging me >_<

See Vertion 2 is up