07-23-2012, 12:39 AM
@Leanne
It's definitely an issue worth talking about. Luckily, most people genuinely do seem to care, even if they can't afford free-range food.
@penguin
I have a fondness for rhyming but sometimes I do allow it to take over my writing. I went through an awful stage of forcing all of my poetry to rhyme and even changed all my old poems. Bad move. Lucky I missed this one.
Thanks for the suggestions, I will definitely take them into consideration when I do the edit.
It's definitely an issue worth talking about. Luckily, most people genuinely do seem to care, even if they can't afford free-range food.
@penguin
I have a fondness for rhyming but sometimes I do allow it to take over my writing. I went through an awful stage of forcing all of my poetry to rhyme and even changed all my old poems. Bad move. Lucky I missed this one.
Thanks for the suggestions, I will definitely take them into consideration when I do the edit.

