WON'T GO - New user here for some crit
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Hi everybody,

I have been writing small poems since I was very young. Originally in Italian and most recently in English. I am not sure why I am really posting this, or any of the future ones. I think mostly because I just need to get them out there and know that somebody has read me.


-WON'T GO -

I rise with the sun, dreaming for clarity.
I lie with the stars, hopelessly sighing another day good bye.
Without you. Yesterday, today and in the foreseeable future.

A river of memories soured with pain,
hard to forgive,
but harder to forget,
it's you.

I fool around with the dream of a light past the tunnel.
I can't see it, but I can feel it in my bones.
A tingling sensation that won't go.

You.
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