Jesus'll Fix It
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Jesus'll fix it
Jim's church follows tradition
Shocking prediction?
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(05-19-2013, 08:51 PM)Mad Matt Wrote:  Jesus'll fix it
Jim's church follows tradition
Shocking prediction?

The tree has broked ( 2year old godson)
God'll fix it.( me)

Who is godle? ( godson)

Best,
tectak

Your poem? Not enough to crit....haiku or no...but I really do not want to hear anything about Saville...best say nothing.
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(05-19-2013, 08:51 PM)Mad Matt Wrote:  Jesus'll fix it
Jim's church follows tradition
Shocking prediction?
Jesus = Jesus
Fix = subject
Jim = Pastor
Tradition = catholic traditions
prediction = Jesus fixing the problem
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
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#4
Not quite, it's a bit more blasphemous than that. But you're right on the Catholic traditions.
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#5
Oh, I was reading Jim as Jim Jones.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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#6
I'm not sure what the prediction is. Is it that Jims church follows tradition or that Jesus will fix it? I feel like I'm missing something.
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(05-19-2013, 08:51 PM)Mad Matt Wrote:  Jesus'll fix it
Jim's church follows tradition
Shocking prediction?

Haha the shocking prediction. Good thing I read the other replies because I was thinking along the lines of blasphemy as well, thanks for the read!
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