Brisco Country Junior Cave's misadventures
#1
"Brisco this is green grass,
green grass. Yea Brisco that is green grass.".
I said.

Ya I know DUMBY HEAD, how many head butts
do I got give you! If i had primitive vocal
communication capabilities i'd say.
SURE. I'll stay on the green grass.
i guess?
Thought my cat.

"Good Brisco.",
I said, knowing that he understands.
a shake of the head one time, though
Brisco County Junior understands.

God damnit, You know I
know what your thinking and stuff.
Why do we always got to go though this
time and time again! Can't we just
cuddle and play. Similar to our
rukus in your trailer pen.

Ok now Rob is gone. Time to exercise.

ZOOM up and down stairs,
in between chairs and though the living room
legs. Over chairs though fake horse
manes. No lanes here like that
trailer pen.

Man I do miss my room.
Brisco thought.
And I do miss Rob....yaaawwwwwwnnnnnnn
ill forget this in one zzz

not sure why there are two of these posted? sorry about that
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
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#2
Do you want me to go through and fix the typos/errors, and so on? The title says "Brisco Country", but I figure it should be Brisco County Jr., right?

Later this afternoon I'm going to need something to do, so I don't go mad. I'll go through and smooth things out

"Brisco, this is green grass,
green grass. Yea, Brisco, that is green grass."
I said.

"Ya, I know, DUMBY HEAD. How many head butts
do I got to give you!? If I had primitive vocal
communication capabilities I'd say,
'SURE. I'll stay on the green grass.
I guess?'"
Thought my cat.

"Good Brisco."
I said, knowing that he understands.
A shake of the head one time, though
Brisco County Junior understands.

"God damnit, you know I
know what you're thinking and stuff.
Why do we always got to go through this
time and time again!? Can't we just
cuddle and play? Similar to our
ruckus in your trailer pen?

"Ok, now Rob is gone. Time to exercise.

"ZOOM up and down stairs,
in between chairs and through the living room
legs. Over chairs through fake horse
manes. No lanes here like that
trailer pen.

"Man I do miss my room."
Brisco thought.
"And I do miss Rob....yaaawwwwwwnnnnnnn
I'll forget this in one zzz"


I just fixed some things. If you don't like it, just say so.
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#3
loved it rowens! thanks for the fix up!
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
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