The boogey man's Soliloquy
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So they’ve etched me in lore have they?
The Boogeyman, they call me the Boogeyman
If they could know what kind of creation spawn-
ed out of ball-point pens perhaps no words
would show me now.
Inside a husk that cages me, hunger gnaws
Inside, rumblings speak my needs to feed
On little boys and little girls and why
Or What the reason for evil thirsts I cannot say
This hunger gnaws within husks that chain my mind
My human mind that lingers beneath Fangs
And wildly matted hair that knots and clumps
Over pinkish naked skin all covered with boils,
Carbuncles, and God the creator only knows
What else. I question scribbled designs
Involving minds and monsters. Vile creatures born
To vileness.
Feeding Salves corporeal needs
But guilt always lingers. A lustful binge
Will rouse my guilt but still I hear victims
Some Screamed signaling life in pain, a
pain that I was causing. Truly monsters,
cursed beings such as I received some wrong doing at birth.


-Note: The Line Breaks Suck and I got lazy with the Blank Verse. If it amuses you in the least I'm interested in any errors you can find, but I didn't spend too much time on this so I wouldn't ask you (the reader) to waste your time. This is more about giving the monster a voice.
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(06-26-2013, 03:47 AM)Brownlie Wrote:  So they’ve etched me in lore have they?
The Boogeyman, they call me the Boogeyman
If they could know what kind of creation spawn-
ed out of ball-point pens perhaps no words
would show me now.
Inside a husk that cages me, hunger gnaws
Inside, rumblings speak my needs to feed
On little boys and little girls and why
Or What the reason for evil thirsts I cannot say
This hunger gnaws within husks that chain my mind
My human mind that lingers beneath Fangs
And wildly matted hair that knots and clumps
Over pinkish naked skin all covered with boils,
Carbuncles, and God the creator only knows
What else. I question scribbled designs
Involving minds and monsters. Vile creatures born
To vileness.
Feeding Salves corporeal needs
But guilt always lingers. A lustful binge
Will rouse my guilt but still I hear victims
Some Screamed signaling life in pain, a
pain that I was causing. Truly monsters,
cursed beings such as I received some wrong doing at birth.


-Note: The Line Breaks Suck and I got lazy with the Blank Verse. If it amuses you in the least I'm interested in any errors you can find, but I didn't spend too much time on this so I wouldn't ask you (the reader) to waste your time. This is more about giving the monster a voice.

YOu have this recent interest in blank verse, which this isn't in any way shape or form, why not try blank verse here?
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Good advice. I'd love to see some new stuff from you too. Thumbsup
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